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INNOCENCE by GrimoireHazelwitch INNOCENCE by GrimoireHazelwitch
any critiques would be very very welcome *3*

edit: changed the shoulders and neck a bit... now it looks so manry ;___;
and not really better I guess... well I tried... q.q
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Veyrius Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh so pretty ;A; .. who is this delightful creature? :XD:
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tingc888 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like colors. :)
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niasweet71 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love this :iconasdfghplz:
if you want a critique I only have a few
everything is amazing in this piece, the color palette, the lighting and the painting style gives it a soft touch , I really like it
if there are some negative points then I would say that the shoulder is small compared to the head and the edge of the lips
is really low, it doesn't feel natural. and there is something that really makes me a little annoyed (no offence) not to you! but it the fact that people draw the ear with out the leg of helix and just connect the helix with the tragus :iconannoyedplz: like this photo 1.bp.blogspot.com/-PKdA85KqI0w…

overall the drawing is really amazing ^^
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Lulie Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice. Delicately handled, beautiful character.

As for critiques: The main thing I see is that the shoulders are very small compared to the head. It looks as though you focused in on the shoulders when you were painting them and didn't compare them to the head size. Also, judging by the angle of the eyes and ear, it looks as though the head is tilted slightly towards us, so we should be seeing a pinch in the neck (and probably the sternomastoid muscles would stick out more, at least they do when I try). The trapezius could also be defined more on the right to make it look more realistic. I recommend checking out this video on drawing necks -- that's how it first clicked for me at least. :3

You say 'any critiques' but the only other stuff I can see is tiny nitpicks, so let me know if you want tiny nitpicks. :) Good job on the atmosphere, dreamy feel. ^^
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Wow thanks a lot for the detailed critique!
After a while I realized too that the shoulders were the width as the head. I felt pretty dumb for it xD
I will definitely give that video a look :3
Actually I redrew the neck area some weeks ago, but didn't get around to upload it yet. I think I might do it today.

And I'd love to hear all the nitpicky things too ^^

Anatomy aside my main problem with the pic is that imo it looks rather boring somehow, and I have no clue what I could do to fix it...
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SigiTurtle Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please, do not change the width of the shoulders. This is what makes this character so fragile and ...hmm...elfish.
Elves are no humans, just human like and their anatomy is comparable, but not alike.
This char is perfect. That!!
If there are any doubts about that, listen to that: www.reverbnation.com/curvedair…
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Angelx91 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT THE.... incredible ! awesome ...wonderful , Ich kanns nicht beschreiben aber es ist tooohoooll >///< !
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
danke dir :3
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Angelx91 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np *-* es sieht aus wie porzellan ..aber lebendig !und so detailreich ! einfach fanstastisch!
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Linyaen Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow!! I really like this. Tender and soft!^^
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