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INNOCENCE by GrimoireHazelwitch INNOCENCE by GrimoireHazelwitch
any critiques would be very very welcome *3*

edit: changed the shoulders and neck a bit... now it looks so manry ;___;
and not really better I guess... well I tried... q.q
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Veyrius Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh so pretty ;A; .. who is this delightful creature? :XD:
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tingc888 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like colors. :)
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niasweet71 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love this :iconasdfghplz:
if you want a critique I only have a few
everything is amazing in this piece, the color palette, the lighting and the painting style gives it a soft touch , I really like it
if there are some negative points then I would say that the shoulder is small compared to the head and the edge of the lips
is really low, it doesn't feel natural. and there is something that really makes me a little annoyed (no offence) not to you! but it the fact that people draw the ear with out the leg of helix and just connect the helix with the tragus :iconannoyedplz: like this photo 1.bp.blogspot.com/-PKdA85KqI0w…

overall the drawing is really amazing ^^
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Lulie Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice. Delicately handled, beautiful character.

As for critiques: The main thing I see is that the shoulders are very small compared to the head. It looks as though you focused in on the shoulders when you were painting them and didn't compare them to the head size. Also, judging by the angle of the eyes and ear, it looks as though the head is tilted slightly towards us, so we should be seeing a pinch in the neck (and probably the sternomastoid muscles would stick out more, at least they do when I try). The trapezius could also be defined more on the right to make it look more realistic. I recommend checking out this video on drawing necks -- that's how it first clicked for me at least. :3

You say 'any critiques' but the only other stuff I can see is tiny nitpicks, so let me know if you want tiny nitpicks. :) Good job on the atmosphere, dreamy feel. ^^
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Wow thanks a lot for the detailed critique!
After a while I realized too that the shoulders were the width as the head. I felt pretty dumb for it xD
I will definitely give that video a look :3
Actually I redrew the neck area some weeks ago, but didn't get around to upload it yet. I think I might do it today.

And I'd love to hear all the nitpicky things too ^^

Anatomy aside my main problem with the pic is that imo it looks rather boring somehow, and I have no clue what I could do to fix it...
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SigiTurtle Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013   Digital Artist
Please, do not change the width of the shoulders. This is what makes this character so fragile and ...hmm...elfish.
Elves are no humans, just human like and their anatomy is comparable, but not alike.
This char is perfect. That!!
If there are any doubts about that, listen to that: www.reverbnation.com/curvedair…
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Angelx91 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT THE.... incredible ! awesome ...wonderful , Ich kanns nicht beschreiben aber es ist tooohoooll >///< !
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
danke dir :3
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Angelx91 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np *-* es sieht aus wie porzellan ..aber lebendig !und so detailreich ! einfach fanstastisch!
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Linyaen Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow!! I really like this. Tender and soft!^^
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
thank you ♡
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SigiTurtle Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013   Digital Artist
...und da Bobbl es noch nicht gesagt hat: phantastische Farbwahl!

Sehr schönes Bild^^
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
aw dankeschön *3* ♡
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Zanaffar Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
oh, wunderschön *__* die Augen und vorallem die Rosen und der Mund sind einfach wundervoll :heart:

und da du gerne kritik haben willst: ich finde der Hals ist etwas zu flach. Wenn jemand den Kopf hebt, dann sieht man egal ob mann, frau, oder elfengleiches Wesen, immer den Adamsapfel, zumindest eben die Luftröhre, die sich leicht erhebt. Bei dir gehts schon fast in die andere Richtung. Außerdem finde ich das Schlüsselbein etwas displaced, bzw. die hintere Schulter. da hätte sicherlich mehr nicht geschadet.

ansonsten ist das Bild äußerst Klasse.
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
duuhuuuu? darf ich dich vielleicht ganz dumm-dreist um redlines oder overpaint oder so bitten?
jedes mal wenn ich versuche das zu fixen, sieht es nur noch abgefuckter aus... q__Q
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Zanaffar Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
bei dem bild jetzt?? ich dachte es ist fertig X___X oder wie jetzt? hab ich dich auf fb?
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
einglich schon, aber jedes mal, wenn ich mir was angucke denke ich mir nur "K R Ü P P E E E E L" und da mir der rest eigentlich gefällt und so will ich das halt unbedingt so lassen und so >.<

und jetzt hast du mich auf facebook :3
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
vielen Dank Bobbl ♡♡

vor allem danke für die Kritik! *3*
elfengleiche Wesen brauchen keine Luftröhre, sie atmen durch ihre Nippel!!1
joa mit allem, was gesichtabwärts ist, hatte ich echt hart Probleme gehabt, besonders bei den Schultern war ich total ratlos >__< wollte die zuerst schon irgendwie abschneiden, dann sah das ganze aber irgendwie noch dööfer aus Dx
ich wusste echt nicht, dass Frauen auch Adamsäpfel haben o.o
werde mir in Zukunft mal öfter Bilder von echten Menschen angucken und so :3
werd mal schaun, ob ich da noch was zurecht geschoben bekomme~

danke und so :hug:
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Asterlie Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013
This is beautiful! <333
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
thank you ♡
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ymstr Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The colors, everything is soo amazing, pure love !!
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
dankööö :hug:
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Feriberri Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely use of paler, more washed out colors <3
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
thanks ;D
(i guess i'm just afraid of constrasts xD)
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MyNameCouldkillYou Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah so pretty~
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
thanks ♡♡♡
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MyNameCouldkillYou Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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Esthiell Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lovely :iconpapcryplz:
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GrimoireHazelwitch Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
thank youu~ ;v;
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